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Thursday, October 17, 2024

October 16



 Graeme kindly offered to MC!  Poems: Otherwise by Jane Kenyon; Mending Wall  by Robert Frost;  Once the world was perfect  by Joy Harjo;  A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning  by John Donne; Did I Miss Anything  by Tom Wayman


I love Graeme's criteria for what he LIKES in a poem:

Clear

Precise

Strong

Brief, even terse

Tells a story

Accessible—most people can understand it

Substance over style

Unpretentious

Elegant

Emotionally arousing

Feelings not just facts

Powerful imagery

Defined or implied audience

Sense that the poet has a purpose

 

 

and also what he DOESN'T Like

Preachy

Taking an easy, popular position—sucking up

Birds, bees, clouds, and flowers

Ugly words or construction

Too long—a page is plenty

Foreign words or expressions that most people wouldn't know

Insensitivity to rhyme and rhythm

Pretentious formatting or construction

Snobbishness

Superiority or contempt

Needless vulgarity

Style over substance



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