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Friday, May 31, 2024

Poems for May 29-30

Romantics by Lisel Mueller; To The People Who Have Resisted the Urge to Push an Asian Person Into the Path of a Moving Train  by Bao Phi; I Ask My Mother to Sing by Li-Young Lee; My Mother Says  by Amy Chan; Lessons from Darkness  by Anita Barrows;  May Song by Wendell Berry 

Romantics: 

Jan suggested that we listen to the piano intermezzi by Brahms.  All of them are beautiful love songs.  Below the op. 118 #2 we listened to to accompany Lisel Mueller's poem.

https://www.bing.com/videos/riverview/relatedvideo?q=brahms+intermezzo+op+118+no+2&mid=0020A2790C71817509990020A2790C7181750999&FORM=VIRE

 

What might biographers have said 150 years ago about Johannes Brahms and Clara Schumann as opposed to "modern" biographers and their more brash manner?  We have a hint seeing the adverb "softly" next to Eros, the old-fashioned language of a gaze "anchored/in someone's eyes (that) could unseat a heart".  The air is not redolent with XYZ but rather redolent air  (i.e. filled with fragrance) trembles and shimmers.  The "question of our age" could refer to first love as a teen vs. love decades later, or love in modern times.  Listening to the op. 118 #2 Intermezzo, you feel the "meshing" of melody which echoes beautifully the feelings between these two people.

 

Discussion included comments about America being a culture revolving  around youth;  "egalitarian language" expresses a more black and white openness lacking the subtlety of 19th century nuances.  Also brought up  was a discussion of other cultures and the impact of technology.

 

The "late-blooming roses" and "dark cascades of leaves" allows a shade of premonition of death in the silence where only the landscape, real and metaphoric speak. 

 

To the people... 

The long title immediately shocks.  Who would push an Asian person (or anyone!) into the path of moving train deliberately?! 

 

The opening stanza speaks of universal concerns for all fellow men.  

The point of the first parenthetical becomes clearer with the second, as if being Asian in America interrupts what should be a universal experience.  Giving up a seat to a man who can't stand to sit with his back to the door has morphed to turning your back on someone.

The third parenthetical could be the opening sentence of a sermon.  Indeed... "Every human being alive and dead is a cautionary tale."  Followed by "Before this, there never was a before this." one senses a danger perhaps of historical amnesia, or a repeating whirl with no beginning or end.   The final stanza brings up considerations of trust and faith. What if indeed, our purpose as humans to all "turn our backs" to a wind we can't see.  The poet doesn't say, trust the wind, but invites the reader to imagine we are sails, pushed by the wind, and going with the flow.

 

 

The discussion demonstrates how powerfully a poem can elicit discussion and demand deep reflection.  Many took offense at the label "entrenched white supremacist" in the poet's comment about his poem.  Many shared horror stories about the very type of attack specifically against Asians,  Chinese against Japanese.  Could the same poem be written about other groups targeted for genocide, about being Black in the USA?

As humans, we tend to categorize, lump and generalize into stereotypes; we "otherize" in strange ways and it would seem any culture has a bit of xenophobia.  The discussion addressed the multiplicity of points of view: compare the US response to Indigeneous Americans vs. Canada's response to "the First People" ; or the difference in reception of a white person in Japan in three different time periods/circumstances (WW2, as an executive decades later and as a tourist).  

 

Kathy brought up Paisley Rekdal's book West: A Translation[1]   which recreates the experience of Chinese workers building the railroad in the West and starts as an elegy, with  56 Chinese characters.  It continues by expanding with a poem for each character.

Marna spoke about her Japanese artist-poet friend she grew up with[2] and how one can be prejudiced towards a culture.  She also shared the experience of a class of 5 year olds at Writers and Books where a  Chinese boy was conditioned by his father to hate any Japanese-- and refused to deal with a Japanese student in the class. 

 

The poem is complex, addressing not only anti-Asian sentiment, but also the fundamental response of a parent to protect a child and the poet's experience as an Asian in America. Listening to him read, whispering the parentheticals, threads in a haunting tone of ghosts.  For more about the poet: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bao_Phi  It is important 

 

I ask my mother to sing .  A distinct contrast from the other poem, this one expresses a tender universal recognition for memory and places once lived, but now far away.  The water metaphor, 

accentuated by the liquid consonants in the 3rd stanza meshes the idea of water overturning lily, only to right itself again, with the song that continues to flow regardless of the tears.  

 

My Mother Says: More singing and meshing, and a beautiful on-going transfer of grace.  The note to the poem quotes Adrienne Rich,  in a surprising way, very different from an activist tone we might associate with her. "Poetry asks of us, "a grace in what we bear".  Many poems have been written with the title "Grace", one of which by Joy Harjo, former National Poet Laureate who shows how difficult it is to do so. https://poets.org/poem/grace-1  We were reminded of the spiritual uplift of Maya Angelou, as well as Li-Young Lee, where the mother's grace (catching light on water, reflected in her face) is gifted, in her daughter's song.  Simple, heartfelt beauty that leaves us with shivers.

 

Lessons from Darkness:  The poem starts with a stark philosophical statement:  Everything you love will perish.  I read again, jump into the mundane details and delight at the fragment: "A magician's act: Presto!" and the jeweled raspberry preserves, going into the practical manifestation of a mother's love for her child, and meditation that restores faith that the world goes on.  A beautiful unfolding, where temporary may well be, but has a way of repeating.

As one participant put it, an invitation to contemplate here and now, afterlife.

 

The discussion brought up the Ise Shrine in Japan, where the Shinto belief in tokowaka (常若), renewing objects to maintain a strong sense of divine prestige in pursuit of eternity, and as a way of passing building techniques from one generation to the next, is practised.  This site explains the complexity of planning ahead and much more. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ise_Grand_Shrine

 

May Song:  Berry continues this sense of connection, letting go, accepting transcience... How reassuring to think of living taking care of itself by simply living, enjoying the "privilege"while it can!  The unusual "inner" example that "flies" from a subway tunnel, ressembles Luther's darkness with the hole in it... but it is not a train, but a window -- an opening to see out, 

and what is seen is this "freehold of life" where the champion is weeds!  I love how he sneaks in the tenacity of life, despite humans, how it is all about us, even if we don't deserve it, cannot see the beauty in weeds "making use" of what we might call "useless". 



[1] https://westtrain.org/click on "enter" to experience a video, multiple voices, the Chinese poems

all part of the 150th anniversary of the "Golden Spike".

this is the first photo: https://westtrain.org/west-a-translation-video-page/

[2] See her current art and poetry here: https://members.aawaa.net/artists/susan-kitazawa

Thursday, May 23, 2024

Poems for May 22-23

 Your Blinded Hand, by Tennessee Williams; Duplex for the Sick and Tired, by Kay Ulanday Barrett; Conservation Status by Penny Boxall; The Silken Tent by Robert Frost; Wading by Jesse Wallis; Journey by Train by May Sarton; The 'Ode to Man' from Sophocles' Antigone  by Anne Carson


Nutshell:

Your Blinded Hand:  How can a hand be "blind"?   Is the hand a stand-in for a guide?  Often seers are blind, relying on insight and visions as opposed to physical sight.  We use "hand" in so many metaphorical ways,  such as "lending a helping hand", or praising the craftsmanship of work by hand.  But here, the injury implied by "blinded" perhaps speaks to some violence and maiming.  With the background of fire, the earth afire, flames everywhere, finding "the other's hand" is akin to hope. Then again, the poems points out, "this might not be so" and indeed, it seems against all odds they might hear the cry of the other. 

I am reminded by Archibald MacLeish of the power of a poem to do what a prose passage cannot, mainly, bring us into the territory of the heart.  As Pascal says, "Le coeur a les raisons que la raison ne connaît point".  The heart has reasons, Reason cannot know.  Blinded—by someone or something  so as not to be able to see? At first it seems it is only "your blinded hand".  The poem ends that "each would find a blinded hand" -- so the poet's hand too has been maimed.  

We discussed at length how pulled in we were by the repeats: The opening "Suppose", the insistance of "I must still believe",  the nuances of the repeated words "this moment". Some thought of atomic destruction; others thought of Williams' past, the horror of his abusive father, the lobotomy of his sister whom he loved so dearly.

Powerful, powerful.  We must reach for each other's hands.

Duplex:  The form, created by Jericho Brown allows a play of saying something two ways with the  end line of a couplet repeated as the first of the next.  The opening line is the closing line (with slight variation). It reminded some of the step by step story where "to do X, I had to Y... and to do Y, I had to..." There could be the literal "sick" and the literal "tired" or all manner of "sick & tired" that longs to be free.  We loved the idea of "salve"-- how it melts, is absorbed... has a biblical sense of salvation... allows us to salvage... This poem sings and salves!!!

Conservation Status:  cool cleave poem... the sparseness allows us to play with the form-- to express serious matters of climate change.  It came up that trees aren't the only thing endangered.  So is silence! Paul provided us with a philosophy 101 lesson about the first question posed in logic which leads to arguments for the existence of God...  "what is the sound of a tree falling" -- which requires details to avoid subjective answer. Judith was reminded of the tirade about Cyrano's nose -- you might enjoy seeing it here with subtitles: https://www.bing.com/videos/riverview/relatedvideo?q=Cyrano+%2b+tirade+du+nez&mid=5AD560AC0F0CB3A511E85AD560AC0F0CB3A511E8&FORM=VIRE

Marna recommended this children's book, Be a Tree: https://mariagianferrari.com/books/be-a-tree/

The Silken Tent: After Robert Frost's wife Elinor passed away, Frost wrote this beautiful love poem about his relationship with Kay Morrison, a married woman.  We had quite the discussion about ropes, tents and the importance of accuracy!  I love that this sonnet is only one sentence long. 

Wading:  Beautiful villanelle-- symmetric to the eye which is not always  the case with this form.  The poetic comparison of this perfect moment to a poem was not unnoticed in the 5th stanza, but everything about the poem feels natural as if there were no form involved. 

Journey: Great vocabulary but only here and there rhythm that lends a sense of traveling.  The rhyme doesn't interfere with the meaning as much as that intrinsic sense of rhythm. 

Ode to Man: Is it an "anti-ode"?  What is the "quiet customer" of man refusing to say?  Fabrications notwithstanding, there is this problem of how man "dooms"... speaks with thought "as clear as complicated air", which is no eloge to man.  Her translation is quite different from Heidegger's:

Poor Antigone:  She does everything right... but caught in the wrong circumstances. 

To compare Carson to Heidegger:  https://blog.we-imagine.net/2013/10/heidegger-vii-ode-on-man-in-sophocles.html

Other sites:  

https://www.theguardian.com/books/2012/jun/08/antigonick-anne-carson-review


I enjoyed Linda Reinfeld's comments, who sees Carson’s Ode  more as a a poem inspired by Antigone than a translation. 

"I can’t say I understand it, but it gives me the shivers, it’s complicated, it confronts the hardest and least understandable ending we all face." 

I am deeply delighted br the way she writes about man subduing the earth.  The excitement! The specificity!  It’s easy to forget the joy human beings feel when they conquer nature. Not necessarily bad. Think airplanes. Think bridges. Think the power of healing! She gets the “high” of conquering, at the same time she sees the evil of it. 

It’s  Death who’s hilarious in high city, not man .  Man is quiet in relation to what he kills, not quiet in what he creates. Cities, laws, god, complications. Man has “utterance” and concepts of morality. Death doesn’t. 

I think one point of the poem is that the initial implication man is to earth as death is to man is only partly true. 

Actually, in this poem not true at all.  Death does not subdue man for his own use; Death has no reason; Death is not complicated; Death is a whole Other Thing.



Friday, May 17, 2024

poems for May 15-6

 Villanelle by Marilyn Hacker;   Letter to the Person Who Carved His Initials into the Oldest Living Longleaf Pine in North America by Matthew Olzmann; Need by Peter Cook and Kenny Lerner ;Translated from the American Sign Language by John Lee Clark; Ode To Broken Things  by Pablo Neruda; Thanks for Remembering Us by Dana Gioia  (from 1986); Accessory to War by Kim Stafford; My Planet by Susan Telfer; a song with no end  by Charles Bukowski

I was so glad for the courage of those who had divergent opinions who expressed them.  All of the poems explore what makes us human, what human can mean in so many diverse ways.

 

Villanelle: A formal poem can be risky if it becomes an intellectual exercise. Most felt the form matched the content and the feel of coming apart, back together -- both personally, as lovers, as a nation with its politics, etc.!  One person felt it was detached from feeling.  Then again... I think you have to be in the "mood" to appreciate any poem and a formal poem runs an even greater risk if the form takes precedence over content.

 

I think the poem resonates with the current general feeling of incomprehensibility in our country and of the world, the prevalence of mass hypnotism that has people supporting tyrants with no concern for the general well-being of human beings.  It indeed leaves me "torn and dazed, speechless and amazed..." it is frightening to see how people learn and repeat "wordless praise" without understanding what is celebrated...  Hacker uses the form skillfully, for instance, in the 4th stanza uses "separate" as adjective and with line/stanza breaks that reinforce the separation. 

 

We were curious why the title is merely "Villanelle" -- as if to peg it only by the name of a form, without naming the distress conveyed.  What title might you give if you wanted to prepare the reader for the content?  

 

Two notes of humor:  Neil, on looking up Villanelle, was brought to "Villain" and we all could imagine variations on a villanelle of the Villain, perhaps with a Nell... Paul picked up on the rhymes and thought another stanza using "taze and eradicate" might sum it up. 

 

Hacker weaves the two lines like a ribbon exploring what it is about parts of us... whether our bodies, aging, or our thoughts, sorting themselves out and how we celebrate, or perhaps fail to celebrate not understanding we could indeed find celebration if we rearrange our thinking and feeling.  I was pleased that Elaine O found notes of celebration in all of the poems -- it confirms my belief that celebration is there alongside all there is that counters.  

 

Letter:  The long title is intriguing, as is the repeated quasi invitation, laden with insults,  to an unknown carver  to reveal himself.  A thank you to Kathleen for having suggested this poem!

 Almost all 20 present had something to say, including a few confessions of being a kid, and inscribing one's initials in a favorite tree... Elaine picked up on an angry tone... a "how could anyone be so disdainful to desecrate a living being" attitude... many resonated with the sense of violation.  Rose Marie reminded us to be careful about judging others -- we don't know the story of the person who carved the initials.   It might have been a child who didn't know better, who loved the tree.  She reminded us of the 2016 use by Hillary Clinton of calling Trump supporters "A Basket of Deplorables" and a few others chimed in about the danger of making assumptions.  The poem gives us no fact about "who did it".  We learn more about Matthew Olzmann than the carver.

Bernie brought up how he felt sad... but also curious about the life of the person (actually he said, "poor slob") who might have done this.  Most thought of the primordial importance of trees, the veneration owed to such long-lived witnesses of time.  Someone else mentioned a tree in Highland park covered with a collection of initials.  

Graeme had the reaction Barbara had to the Villanelle of not being "taken" by the poem.  (I was so glad for each of them to have the courage to disagree with the 90%!)
Graeme's point:  the sense of contempt was overdone.  He was not moved to pity for tree, nor for outrage for the villain.  To quote him further, he is "sick of poems that take me by the ankles and suspend me upside down over great vats of boiling roiling righteous indignation, dipping me into each so that I wriggle squeal and splutter on cue." 

Elaine was glad for the breath of nature that reminds us to celebrate the beauty of wild things.  How does Olzmann know the carver would yawn with indifference?

You can see-- it was quite the poem!  We spent at least 1/2 hour on it.
Polly quoted, "I shall never see a tree at all, unless the billboards fall."

Need:  This is an ASL poem, translated by John Lee Clark who is both blind and deaf, so he is relying on protactile on the interpreter's body.  Thank you to Rose Marie who explained this. She also mentioned the poem was in response to the US involvement with Iraq.   You can watch the video of the ASL version. https://www.bing.com/videos/riverview/relatedvideo?&q=Need+by+Peter+Cook+and+Kenny+Lerner&qpvt=Need+by+Peter+Cook+and+Kenny+Lerner&mid=261FC29A5DD660149EE3261FC29A5DD660149EE3&&FORM=VRDGAR
There is a velocity in the written language, and the spoken words drive the frantic, anxious pumping of machines which rule our world.  If you have any doubt of how humans abuse the world, each other, this poem will persuade you.  Paul brought up MacBeth, "the sound and the fury" -- perhaps our fear is that it all signify nothing.  With the insertion of the single sheet of paper, one hopes the poem will turn  direction ... but it  only reinforces the executive power of orders in the wrong hands and wars fought to preserve the insanity providing profit for the CEO and shareholders.
Mike suggested the final word be added, "more".

Ode to Broken Things: note:  translated by Jodey Bateman:

recommended by Bernie https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i4MXPIpj5sA

Koyaanisqatsi   Life out of Balance

Note:  In the penultimate stanza a typo perhaps:  "what lasts through time is like an island or a ship" not "on a ship".  Whether or not you see scarlet as blood, violet as violence, powder of a flowerpot as gun,  by the time you get to the stanza of the clock, it would seem breaking is inevitable.   The idea of an existence "wound up by a clockmaker who then departed for parts unknown" perhaps is implied, by the opening reference to "an invisible, deliberate smasher".  Something greater than our human ingenuity to create, and destroy.  Even if no one breaks things, especially the useless things that perhaps would be better broken, the surprise is that "they break anyway."  No matter our role, all will break.  Loss is part of life and best to let go...  The poem is told in the past tense.  

We enjoyed the part about tossing all the treasures into the sea (Elaine O underlines the celebration!  There are also many traditions that would wrap up "concerns" written on a leaf, or paper, then burned. ) 

The sea as source of the origin of life... metaphoric spirituality... and in English, the pun on "breakers"  


Thanks for Remembering: delightful humor.  More confessions were made of "small crimes" such as Paul's picking up a dropped roll of stamps.  


accessory : Kim Stafford, like his father, Bill Stafford, is a pacifist.  His poem, with those two stanzas in the form of bullets indeed, tells us a lot about  him, what he cherishes, his feelings about our defense budget... !  One person wondered about the first stanza with so many references to the Middle East.  Curious, as I had a grandmother who mentioned the same things from her time in Lebanon in 1920.  Polly mentioned that you can indicate that you pay taxes used for the defense budget "under protest".  ( We joked that we could write the President, and use Paul's stamps.)  There's a caveat there too... if each individual starts to protest different official programs  government, it can open up quite the can of worms.
Note the contrast in the 4th line of the first stanza, "my brother", and the horror of what "my taxes" did to "her brother". 

My Planet:  Response to PK Page, "Planet Earth".  You can hear her read it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWFTFE8Icf0  We agreed that the poem had a dream-like unreality which allowed an easier acceptance of strange leaps between the stanzas.  Likewise, the "close-enough" but not consistent rhymes perhaps could point to an unsuccessful attempt to keep order.  Hypnogogic.

a song with no end:  Bukowski, 1920-1994.  Born Heinrich Karl, in Germany  he adopted Charles in America.
We all enjoyed the stanza about "making death work hard"... perhaps a better ending to suggest just what this "victory" is for either us or death might be this:
when it does take us....
it will look at us and say, "well-played my friend".  (Suggestion of Mike .)

Marna shifted to an association with Dickinson, "Hope is the thing with feathers".

Whatever it is this life, it does seem to keep going.  But perhaps there is a note of apocalypse. 

Thursday, May 9, 2024

poems for May 8


 We will start with The Return by Robinson Jeffers and My God It's Full of Stars (Part 5) by Tracy K. Smith which had been slated for May 1-2. other poems: Poetry : n., pl  by Virginia Elson; 

To Find Stars in Another Language by Elizabeth Bradfield; Visible Light by Heidi Seaborn; When Light Breaks by Jonathan Everitt; When Light Breaks by Jonathan Everitt; When Light Breaks by Jonathan Everitt

 

email sent out: Thank you Kathleen for sharing your rousing Patriot's Day account-- for just in case people want to re-read the

Midnight Ride of Paul Revere next year https://poets.org/poem/paul-reveres-ride
I also compiled a few thoughts from Popova's blog which curiously echoed much of the discussion : 
also "Supplement to May 8" -- and the Side by Side "Reflections in the Florist's Window by Virginia Elson.

Nutshell:

Return: Not "The return" but "Return".  Several people felt they couldn't sense where they were.  Others that place didn't need specification but was a feeling of "my home, my life here".   I showed a picture of Pico Blanco (in California) since it is mentioned. 
It is clear that Jeffers is an environmentalist .  I'm not sure when he wrote it (his dates: 1887-1962) but it was posted on Writers Almanac in 2000.  There is a refreshing wholeness and timelessness to it.  The simile of thoughts as "mouthless May Flies darkening the sky" that continues as what blinds our inner "passionate hawks".  He is echoing a maxim of William Carlos Williams, modernist poet "No idea but in things" which encapsulates the essence of the Imagists' poetic philosophy.

My God, It's Full of Stars (Part 5):  A lovely tribute to the poet's father which paints as well a hint of history of space exploration. Each stanza had a different voice and point of view. Posted in Maria Popova's blog, she says this: the poem's  title borrowed from Arthur C. Clarke’s 2001: A Space Odyssey — found in her sublime poetry collection Life on Mars(public library). The poem is Smith’s quest to bring lyrical and cinematic language to, as she herself frames it, “this real mystery, the universe that we belong to, that we’re at home in and yet such strangers of, in a way.”

 
 Jim reminded us of the APOD -- Astronomy Picture of the Day... and how if you think of our sun as a series of nuclear explosions we see from our position as 3rd planet ... our preoccupations with "The Button" and atom bombs seems slightly exaggerated in importance.  Different interpretations were offered for the 1st line, 3rd stanza:  How does she mean "struggle" to view our enemies as children?  The 1950's "great US, and the rest of the world stupid" or trying to see others as innocent.  She captures the awesome immensity of space and our rather ridiculous activities on earth in the 5th stanza. 
Then the one line stanza:  Is that all?  "We learned new words for things.  The decade changed." This is the comfort of history repeating.  

The final line is enigmatic and quite powerful.  "to see to" the edge... is layered ... Can we see "to the edge of all there is?"
All there is, so brutal and alive... how do you understand that it would "understand us back"?  Are we also brutal and alive?

Perhaps Smith is making a comment about our curiosity, our desire to know-- thatwe made all these machines and efforts to probe the universe.  Oh... we THINK we are "seeing to the task"... and the universe mirrors our efforts back to us?????


Many people called on Science Fiction :  Jerry Pournelle and Larry Niven (mentioned in the poem): The Mote in God's Eye and Lucifer's Hammer, Ringworld Trilogy.  Pournelle was the mathematics... traveling in space and finding a ringworld... mostly philosophy.  Elmer mentioned Duncan Moore,Rochester Professor of Optical engineering, met the Apollo 11 astronauts during the 30th anniversary celebrations in 1999. 

 

 Poetry: a perfect definition by Virginia Elson in 5 lines.  Elmer brought up that the Asian variety of Bittersweet is an invasive species... which works beautifully in that second line, whether as metaphor or plant to tangle with barbed wire. Here, on

there. 

To Find Stars: Elaine pointed out the poet is Lesbian and perhaps the italics are an indirect reference that no matter what arrangement of "There was once" or boy or girl, the point is to let everything be.  The discussion brought up the misunderstandings of what is not "familiar"  (needs of one person often do not correspond with those of another).  

What language might help us?  The choice of "glistered" as adjective for conversations has a "blistered" sound, albeit meaning "sparkle, glitter".  Judith brought up the story telling techniques of Georgian folktales:  "There was, but there was not... an yet, there was." Suggested reference: https://www.pbs.org/show/a-brief-history-of-the-future/


Visible Light: We wondered who "you" is in the poem?  It was confusing not to know if it were a glib self-referential pronoun, or addressing the reader, or some unknown third party.  We imagined scenarios for all three.  Is the tone sarcastic, describing the dog running into lamp posts, adding the simultaneous spectrum of evening news pulsing from a neighbor's TV.  Tenderness for them?  Really?  A desire to enter their darkened rooms and sit watching the televised world? What is it we want from visible light?


When Light Breaks :  we relived the eclipse a little bit. Everyone liked the couplet that reminded us: "A poem can set life on a different course... and then the title is repeated as anaphor and the poem breaks into a sort of prayer.


Mind Wanting more:  Not much discussion.  Self evident that the mind wants more... as if light were not enough... as if joy weren't strewn all around.


A gift: Yes... we are given the questions of others as if they were answers to all you ask.  





 

Friday, May 3, 2024

Discussion of Poems May 1-2


Opening Quotations from Nature:

"If I ever see more clearly at one time than at another, the medium through which I see is clearer."-- Thoreau

 

As a blind man, lifting a curtain, knows it is morning,

I know this change:

On one side of silence there is no smile;

But when I breathe with the birds,

The spirit of wrath becomes the spirit of blessing,

And the dead begin from their dark to sing in my sleep.

-- Theodore Roethke (strophe from Part II, "Journey to the Interior"

Poems for discussion : Depth of Field by William Heyen; The Poems of our Climate by Wallace Stevens;   Meditation  by William Stafford;  Emancipation Proclamation by William Heyen;  Tell me a story Robert Penn Warren; Fana al-Fana by William Heyen; For the Anniversary of my Death by W. S. Merwin;  

Depth of Field (Heyen)Do you remember the days of those heavy cameras with all manner of possibilities to manipulate lenses?  Like the quote from Thoreau about "the medium through which we see", adjusting the depth of field will indeed enable us to see in a different way.  The poem, filled with the musical alliterations, weaves observations of a black widow spider (at first you might think a woman, curled in grief with a metaphorical interconnectedness where "whorl" winds to enjamb with"threads"), along with the arrival of first "shaft of sunlight" steering among the blades of grass.
The strum of the low wind, the net sings the music of its catch,  harmonizes with the greater music of
"the harp of curved sun that orchestrates the morning."
We appreciated the enjambments which allowed a pause as if the thought were finished on the final line of each quatrain, only to float through the stanza break to land on a fuller, often unexpected completion. The repetition, with variation, such as "imperceptible" to "imperceptibly", "dark grass" "darkening the whorl of threads" 

The Poems of our Climate (Stevens):  (for a fuller explanation of this poem and Stevens work: Harold Bloom published a volume by the same title in 1980).  The poem, written in 1942, is from  Parts of a World .  
There are three sections and indeed, it seems a trilogy moving from a cold "climate" with a view of "simple perfection" of carnations floating in a bowl, passing to a "monkey wrench" stanza, as one person put it, looking at the "evil eye of ego" to conclude on a reflection on the "imperfect" so "hot in us".  Fitting that the final lines starts with "lies", the wonderful paradox of noun and verb...which reminds us that our perceptions are "illusions" resting in our  mind.  It feels much more accessible that Stevens explanations in "Of Modern Poetry".  
It would seem with the repeats in the first stanza, we are dealing not with obvious redundancies, but reflections about perception.  And yet, "One desires so much more than that."  Carolyn remarked that porcelain warms to the touch which perhaps points to a need to understand "cold" metaphorically. 
There is no verb in the first two lines.  Just a glimpse.  I think of old-fashioned television sets with "snowy air".  What kind of reflection of snow is that?  
Stanza two modifies "brilliant bowl" to "world of clear water, brilliant-edged" and desire is more impatient! "Still one would want more, one would need more".
Stanza three sets us straight about our desires, and whatever we might think about Paradise.  It feels very Zen to be able to let go of wishing to "go back" (echo of "return" in the first stanza) to understand that whatever "now" is, our words and music can only approximate Paradise.

Meditation (Stafford): Knowing that Stafford was a pacifist, and knowing the title is "Meditation" this should influence the tone of the poem.  There are many ways to say "That's the world".  You could design an entire semester around religious studies to examine the explanation of the world as "God holding still/
letting it happen again,/ and again and again.
Stafford does not specify that  "it" is good or evil, just as the animals filled with light might be the ones walking through the forest, or they are simply part of a description of a moment: Animals; a walk in the forest... this vague idea of "someone" the eerie feeling they hold a gun loaded with darkness that threatens it.  We did not discuss fear, but could have gone on at length .  Why do we humans insist that "God would never let THIS happen", and yet, when we see the horrors of war repeat, we shake our fists and say, "how could you let this happen".  When we think we could have avoided a horrible accident, we do the same,
blaming ourselves.  
Looking at the simplicity of the poem, the first two lines set the scene... what's next?  It might be good, or not, and I think of all the folk tales which try to remind us not to judge or place value prematurely and expect we are right!  (see Bronowski: https://www.themarginalian.org/2014/04/24/jacob-bronowski-ascent-of-man-knowledge-certainty/?mc_cid=ca2c397ca3&mc_eid=2e713bf367  
The mind is also loaded, and can fire with words... we fear words that bring darkness.  But back to the yin and yang, there is light... and potential of darkness.  If there is a God, or however you conceive of God, the fact is, the job description does not ask for His action.  

You can imagine in a room full of 20 people, everyone had the urge to explain an understanding of God.
Since the poems in the session  had a strong Emersonian flavor, the idea of God as being inside any living being, invites humans to take responsibility.  For further thinking I suggest this link: 
“Character — the willingness to accept responsibility for one’s own life — is the source from which self-respect springs,” Joan Didion

Thus starts a magnificent posting about Hesse and  embracing uncertainty: how it is better not to have fixed ideas about God, right and wrong.

From https://www.themarginalian.org/2018/12/12/hermann-hesse-letter-to-a-young-german/

Emancipation Proclamation (Heyen):  Well...  with a "prologue" of the discussion provoked by Stafford, the next poem perhaps was not given a pristine condition free of prejudice.  The poem adopts the language in which our country's democratic principles are expressed and some felt reminiscent of the Magna Carta.    The unusual first line undoes any pomposity... and part of the poem seems to be a critique of how we humans act in our society as opposed to a tree, upholding its faithful, generous, authentic self.  Perhaps there is a bit of "underground railroad" involved in the gospel of the roots... perhaps "heartwood grave" is a noun, or indicates the solemnity of awe, that the tree hold "our firmament" (a word that immediately leads to the sacred, carried on in the next stanza).  Some thought the final stanza not necessary.  Some felt every school child should memorize this poem.  As one person put it, this poem is like life-- there is nothing boring about it, or life.

One has an immediate vision of famous trees in myth and history:  Ydrassil, the Tree of Life, the Bodhi Tree ( "tree of awakening") where Buddha received his enlightenment, etc.     Enough.  Read the poem.  Listen to it, to the calm intonation.  I am glad the poem is there on the corner of Prince and University as part of Poet's Walk. 

Tell me a Story: (Robert Penn Warren): The  group demonstrated good understanding of this last section of Warren's book-length poem, "Audubon: A vision" (1969).  Indeed, the two parts draw a sharp contrast: A, the child's world, the sense of wonder but without any "visible" reasons; B, the repeated title three more times as if by telling a tale, we could repair the hollowness of modernity and ravages of time.  Rose Marie mentioned a book she is reading Time Shelter which explores time by thinking of the past as something "ahead of us", and the future as something to learn from that lies "behind us."  https://wwnorton.com/books/9781324090953  Indeed, Time is one of the most important inventions by which we organize our life.  I love that the slant poetic advice "show don't tell" slips into the story the narrator demands (the name of the story, Time, but you must not pronounce its name.).  Yes, ironic... but a reminder, "in this moment of mania", what we seek is "depth".  That is a poem's major job.  To surprise us,
give us that delight of "why, I hadn't thought of that in that way", which immediately alivens us, elevates and uplifts us.
The group took a long tangent to discuss associations with geese.  Yes, they tell a story too... and for each of us, perhaps a different spin -- for some "Gabriel Hounds foretelling death", for other renewal, change of season.  All agreed there was a sense of "Indulge me... while I'm alive, freeze time, and let us connect through our stories."

Carolyn shared her lovely memories of the Robert Penn Warren Poem, “Tell me a Story” afterwards:   "13 years ago she had pitched an art program for seniors based on this poem to the regional museum in Orange County and it was picked up by the Irvine Foundation for $500K and then an additional $1mill.based on this poem.   It was a huge success."  

Fana-al Fana: (Heyen): The dedication poem of Nature to Heyen's wife, addresses this theme of time,
and our fear of not using our time well.  We are brought back to "rootless light from dead stars"—a small sprinkle of life in each of us, so infinitesimally tiny in this immense universe around us.   And what helps us cope with this fear, but love, which indeed, stays alive as long as we live.

For the Anniversary: (W.S. Merwin): One senses an older person imagining his death.  There is no "personal bemoaning" or regret, but rather a meditative examination of what it might be like to be dead, and look back on life.   From this perspective, he can look differently at our earth, at love, shake his head at the shamelessness of humans.  There is that unspoken awe in the last line after the physical detail 
of rain... associated with a sense perhaps of endless falling (and repeat of shamelessness, failing)
the bird song uplifts.  There is a satisfying abruptness -- indeed, back to the imperfect... 


Poems for May 1-2-- and an extra note about Bill Heyen, E.B. White and Hesse!

 A new month!  I should have paid attention to "Earth Day" celebrations last week, and try somewhat to make up for it with this week's selection: 

A fitting place to start and as follow-up to Bill Heyen's delightful sharing and reading at the Pittsford Library 4/21 is his book Nature: New and Selected Poems (2020) from 10 of his books produced between 1970-1991. For a sample of poems,  reviews of the individual books represented, the Table of Contents, and a hefty sampling of poems from Depth of Field (1970) see: https://www.amazon.com/Nature-Selected-New-Poems-1970-2020/dp/9390202027?asin=9390202027&revisionId=&format=4&depth=1

Bill Heyen wanted to be sure everyone knows the 2020 version of Nature published by Mammoth is the one to consult.  The edition of Nature on Amazon is the paperback published in India, not the beauty from MAMMOTH books

Both Nature  and Diaspora: New and Selected Poems (2024)  from 15 of his collections, are available through the Monroe County Library system. 

Opening Quotations from Nature:

"If I ever see more clearly at one time than at another, the medium through which I see is clearer."-- Thoreau

 

As a blind man, lifting a curtain, knows it is morning,

I know this change:

On one side of silence there is no smile;

But when I breathe with the birds,

The spirit of wrath becomes the spirit of blessing,

And the dead begin from their dark to sing in my sleep.

-- Theodore Roethke (strophe from Part II, "Journey to the Interior"

Poems for discussion : Depth of Field by William Heyen; The Poems of our Climate by Wallace Stevens;   Meditation  by William Stafford;  Emancipation Proclamation by William Heyen;  Tell me a story Robert Penn Warren; Fana al-Fana by William Heyen; For the Anniversary of my Death by W. S. Merwin;  

In addition to an apology  for the typo of "fun" on the 3rd line of .  the first line of the William Stafford "Meditation" should be "Animals filled of light" for good reason.  Several people picked up on the typo 3rd line, and is loaded with darkness is indeed a gun.

The O Pen session May 1 indeed provided rich fodder for a discussion of "dark vs. light", good vs. evil and all manner of religious and philosophical commentary.  Maria Popova's blog this week seemed perfectly suited, to continue with an examination of the dangers of "the dark side of certitude", especially when it adopts a self-righteous attitude which can deludes us.  I highly recommend:  https://www.themarginalian.org/2014/04/24/jacob-bronowski-ascent-of-man-knowledge-certainty/?mc_cid=ca2c397ca3&mc_eid=2e713bf367 Also she mentioned E.B. White's "soul-stretching" epistles in Letters of Note.  This one could be written for all of us: 

Dear Mr. Nadeau:

 

As long as there is one upright man, as long as there is one compassionate woman, the contagion may spread and the scene is not desolate. Hope is the thing that is left to us, in a bad time. I shall get up Sunday morning and wind the clock, as a contribution to order and steadfastness.

 

Sailors have an expression about the weather: they say, the weather is a great bluffer. I guess the same is true of our human society — things can look dark, then a break shows in the clouds, and all is changed, sometimes rather suddenly. It is quite obvious that the human race has made a queer mess of life on this planet. But as a people we probably harbor seeds of goodness that have lain for a long time waiting to sprout when the conditions are right. Man’s curiosity, his relentlessness, his inventiveness, his ingenuity have led him into deep trouble. We can only hope that these same traits will enable him to claw his way out.

 

Hang on to your hat. Hang on to your hope. And wind the clock, for tomorrow is another day.

 

Sincerely, E. B. White

It accompanies  Herman Hesse  writing to a despairing young man after World War I:  "I believe your state of mind and soul to be the right one. Not to know whether there is a God, not to know whether there is good and evil, is far better than to know for sure."



Although I did not include in the poems for May 1,  Whitman's "A Clear Midnight" it should figure in my summary of 4/21 as he referred to it several times, adding  the anecdote about Whitman being asked "what about Shakespeare, Dante?"  To which Whitman replies:  "Apples and Oranges.  Shakespeare and company are poets of an art language.  I don't want to write an art language."

A Clear Midnight by Walt Whitman 1819 –1892

 

This is thy hour O Soul, thy free flight into the wordless,

Away from books, away from art, the day erased, the lesson done,

Thee fully forth emerging, silent, gazing, pondering the themes thou lovest best,

Night, sleep, death and the stars.

 This wonderful interview of Bill talks about his book about Whitman"Yawp" ! and many of the references he made.  https://www.beforeyourquieteyesbooksandart.com/projects-2

 There are two parts to the interview one about Heyen's book Yawp about Whitman;  The other is a Q&A which goes into the question of audience and who is reading who which leaves me with a kinder sense about his comments about his journal.
He minored in Philosophy and Aesthetics, so I think any comment he makes about writing poetry goes make to an Emersonian and Whitmanesque sense of unity, where the benefit of writing a poem is to find the gift it provides -- it continues to surprise and lead you to ask questions!
He mentions his 13 syllable "Scherzi" and repeats the W.S. Merwin "I'm in a strange garment" idea.  He also adds Wallace Stevens, "Of Modern Poetry"  that helps us understand perhaps what Emerson said about a poet needing to think with the flower of the intellect. https://www.writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88/of-modern-poetry.html

Of Modern Poetry  by Wallace Stevens

 

The poem of the mind in the act of finding

What will suffice. It has not always had

To find: the scene was set; it repeated what 

Was in the script.

                                    Then the theatre was changed

To something else. Its past was a souvenir.

 

It has to be living, to learn the speech of the place.

It has to face the men of the time and to meet 

The women of the time. It has to think about war

And it has to find what will suffice. It has

To construct a new stage. It has to be on that stage, 

And, like an insatiable actor, slowly and

With meditation, speak words that in the ear,

In the delicatest ear of the mind, repeat,

Exactly, that which it wants to hear, at the sound

Of which, an invisible audience listens,

Not to the play, but to itself, expressed

In an emotion as of two people, as of two

Emotions becoming one. The actor is

A metaphysician in the dark, twanging 

An instrument, twanging a wiry string that gives

Sounds passing through sudden rightnesses, wholly

Containing the mind, below which it cannot descend,

Beyond which it has no will to rise.

                                                It must

Be the finding of a satisfaction, and may

Be of a man skating, a woman dancing, a woman

Combing. The poem of the act of the mind.

**


  

Friday, April 26, 2024

poems for April 24-5

This week, a little bit of pairing of poems by Virginia Elson**, kindly lent by Polly.** A narrow Fellow in the Grass (1096) by Emily Dickinson  and 0°   by Virginia Elson;  Crows and Crocuses by Virginia Elson; Leap Frog/Astronaught by Virginia Elson;  At This Party  By Hafiz and Catalyst  by Virginia Elson (Invitation to the Dance); May Flowers Twice; A Gift for Emily Dickinson + Dickinson's poem about daffodils;  Discovery; Reflections in a Florists' Window.  We end with a jewel of a poem by William Heyen, The Return.

I started with mention of the marvelous hour of sharing by Bill Heyen on Sunday April 21.  For a souvenir of Bill's manner and delivery, many of the things above can be heard from this 2021 video of Bill talking about his book "Yawp" about Whitman. https://www.beforeyourquieteyesbooksandart.com/projects-2

I post separately my write-up with references to these poems: Merwin's line from the Anniversary of my Death; Heyen's dedication poem, Fana al-Fana to Naturehis compendium of poems from 10 of his books, several Wallace Stevens poems: Of Modern Poetry;  Woman in Sunshine; The Poems of Our Climate; Imperfect is paradise Robert Penn Warren, Tell me a Story https://poets.org/poem/tell-me-story  what Heyen calls his "darkest poem", The Killers, and Stafford's Meditation.

**Virginia Elson, (1919-2000) was the teacher and good friend of Polly Nelson. I typed up 31 of her poems for publication by FootHills sometime this summer -- the title of the book is yet to be determined, as they were all hand-written in a journal called "Record".   [FootHills  published a chapbook in 2004, Harrier  of 42 of her poems .  It was edited by Linda Allardt with the generous assistance of Sarah Curtis and Judith Kitchen.]

 Virginia has another book "And Echoes for Direction" published in 1987 by the State Street Press, edited by Judith Kitchen.  (on the back is a blurb by Robert Bly who says this: "I read Virginia Elson's poem And Echoes for Direction in the Atlantic and liked it so much that I wrote to her though we had never met.  Her poem "Suddenly During the Night" is a small masterpiece.  In her best poems she descends to a place where death is hardly distinguishable from new life".

The blurb by Judith Kitchen: "Seasons make a sine curve through these poems giving us the timeless quality of nature. Signs are everywhere, if only we will notice, and Virginia Elson notices— with wit, with sympathy, with a tenacious hold on what is most human."

Nutshell:

A narrow fellow:  Emily's observation of a snake, without once pronouncing the word, captures the movement as it "rides" in the grass, "dividing it as with a comb".  Immediately, the reader is drawn in, as she asks "you may have met him?  did you not..." and inverts the syntax "His notice instant is".  The sense of displacement reminded Neil of Stranger in a Strange Land.  Interesting that Emily takes the viewpoint of a barefoot boy (both b's are capitalized, as is Boggy, a several other nouns).  We remarked on how few people feel "cordiality" towards snakes as opposed to other of "Nature's People" (the statistics say only 3% of people are not afraid of them).  Elaine mentioned her pet snake, and how it enjoyed wrapped around her waist for warmth... Like any animal, if we startle them, they'll defend themselves, and Emily captures that with the "Whip Lash" and how it wrinkled... then gone. The "zero at the bone" perfectly describes the tight, shivery feel of fear.

Zero Degrees: Virginia's poem explores temperature using much of the same vocabulary.  Darkest night, not of the soul, but coupled with "knobbled vertebrae", one thinks of an older person writing and something human at stake.   She also takes liberty with syntax (Outside from the eaves depends) and delightful contrast with the unusual image of icicles as "spine of ice", and within "bone up-ends/its own precarious stress.  The similar wit of rhyming "dumb" (silent) and "numb" mimics the verb choice, "cushion" the sound of frost at work.  I for one will never think of frost patterns on windows other than as a calligraphy of "ciphers".  The "double blow" of the rhyme, the ice (possible because of the zero degrees) and numbed marrow, gives us the sense of how unable we are to feel when frozen.  People were reminded by that final word, "nothing" of King Lear. Above all, we were taken by Virginia's elegant eloquence.

Crows and Crocuses: Good occlusives in the title, the first, something we see all year, the later, the first sign of spring. We enjoyed the spacing after "air"... the vertical line up of "That still" and "Holds chill", the one syllable on a line of "Thin" and "Green", rather like the slow drop of sap into a bucket -- indeed a "promise of sweetness/only half convincing".  These hand-written poems as mentioned above were given to Polly and dedicated to her.  The "your birthday" refers to Polly's.  

Leap Frog: https://afroghouse.org/ We'll look forward to seeing this poem on "The Frog Blog"! There's a touch of "naughty" in the wit of the "Astronaught" and the description of the launch of this shining self of a frog rising about "bubble dust" in the lively rhythms, the tip-tilted antics in parentheses,  cheery rhymes and playful double meaning in the title.  Too "lunar to adopt a satellite?" Green upon green, white upon green, we end up with Green upon white... "leaving us to consider roots and stresses/among the Pascal reeds and water cresses."  Whether Pascal applied to the reeds implies the philosopher, the unit of Pressure named after him, or Easter,  perhaps this quote will twist you to thinking the former:  from Blaise Pascal, Pensées " “Man is only a reed, the weakest in nature, but he is a thinking reed. There is no need for the whole universe to take up arms to crush him: a vapour, a drop of water is enough to kill him. but even if the universe were to crush him, man would still be nobler than his slayer, because he knows that he is dying and the advantage the universe has over him. The universe knows none of this.”

At this party: translated by Daniel Ladinsky, makes you feel indeed at a festive party.  14th century Sufi philosopher/poet, Hafiz, captures the spirit of Ramadan we saw last week in the poem, Eid Mubarak.  People asked about this most important Persian poet -- see the poem paired with a painting of "preparing a feast" https://flashmoment3.home.blog/2020/03/30/persianpreparing-a-meal-illustration-from-an-epic-poem-by-hafiz-shirazi/ For more poems: see https://bestlife3822.medium.com/the-best-hafez-poems-185762cf18f7 ; see the translator's notes  in this link to the Hafiz poem where the heart questions reality.https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/50967/for-years-my-heart-inquired-of-me-- There is also a bit of moral to the story-- at the party, make room for others.  Indirectly, it reminds me of what Teilhard de Chardin said about the world being round -- "so that friendship may circle it."  

Catalyst: I paired Virginia's poem with the Hafiz, as the phrase in brackets has his kind of spirit.  [Let's create our own living].  What triggers the urge to dance?  The poem goes from stillness by a pond, and solo touch of the willows on their own reflections to an invitation to step in!  We discussed the flurry of F's  describing the "feathered brown explosion above" fusing with "finned flurry" below-- human legs making the trees dance -- as for the "touching each other" -- it's every possibility of tree, two people, connecting. Some noted the semi-colons at the end of the first two lines: complete thoughts with a pause, I call them. Marna was reminded of the refrain of "Lord of the Dance".  Dance, then, wher­ev­er you may be; I am the Lord of the Dance, said he./And I’ll lead you all wher­ev­er you may be,/And I’ll lead you all in the dance, said he. We felt a cinematic precision producing a magnificent moving picture!

May Flowers Twice:  "May" could be the month, adjective for flowers, or verb flowering as possibility.  The witty title also doubles the meaning of "flowers" as noun and verb.  Trilium, twice-mentioned as seen by a child, and again as an older woman.  Jack in the Pulpit appears twice as well, first broken... and then serves "double duty" in the more enigmatic indentation where it seems to be part of the question "where, anywhere in the world is..." and also subject of "dares".  One can also read "Dares moralize mortality with flowers" as scrambled syntax:  Mortality dares moralize (with flowers).  Her stone at the end, we agreed refers to the mother's grave.  

A Gift for Emily: I paired this with Emily's 4 lines, "I dared not meet the daffodils", and we remarked on her choice of dressing modestly in white.  Virginia's poem pays her homage, refers to the sound of Emily's "quizzical bright scissors" and provides a perfect description of the effect of her poetry: "like crickets in the evening, like the stir/of little things surprised by sudden space."  Although Virginia wrote a similar poem referring to Emily as "poet of paradox, and reference to Uranium atoms "mushrooming sand", here, the title is changed from "sonnet" to "Gift".  It is more than just "understanding", but actually holding a pen, "holder of celestial contraband—", and using the famous em-dash, finishing on the final line: "An atom split, and placed within your hand."

Discovery: We were delighted with the originality: the childhood where "sun sang in my blood", the blossoming of womanhood, "moons womanned all my heart" and the third stage of a mature woman more fully understanding after reflection of the lines concluding the first two stanzas (I do not think I loved... the rain; the clouds), the more universal complete idea of love.  The cadences are beautiful, and Polly was reminded of the 18th century Richard Lovelace, "I could not love thee Dear half as much/Lov'd I not Honour more" (the ending lines of To Lucasta: Going to the Wars: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44658/to-lucasta-going-to-the-wars

Many had many associations with this poem!  Marna was reminded of Cummings, In Just Spring "when the world is  Mud-luscious https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/47247/in-justNeil was reminded of The Spice Girls https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spice_Girls Emily was reminded of Dylan Thomas (see last stanza of Fern Hill): https://www.panmacmillan.com/blogs/literary/dylan-thomas-welsh-poems and also Things I Didn’t Know I Loved  by Nâzim Hikmet 1902 – 1963 https://poets.org/poem/things-i-didnt-know-i-loved 

 Reflections: In the hand-written version, the poem's many layered reflections, starting with the city traffic in the Florist window, seems to continue in the double brackets where  "February" is under "disembodied" -- and outside the bracket is the word "face".   I think it allows the reader to see "face" as both noun and  implied verb where "time and space" face flowers, the spring season of resurrection (Easter Lilies)  perhaps facing back to the first flowers in February (crocus), both of those flowers also in brackets.  The powerful reflection of taxis that roar, buses that fling in the window -- both with "abstracted" wheels, in this tangle appearing in the window, captures a most unusual setting!  Is the "face" as noun,  the Christ at Easter, risen, the face of the poet looking in this window? How many different subjects "face" us as we read? (Taxis, daffodil, buses, the parenthetical lilies, crocus, time and space).  Intriguing poem with a surrealistic effect.

 

On double-checking, I found the version which appeared in And Echoes for Direction p. 58.  Perhaps some readers might feel an element of intrigue has been traded in favor of clarity.   The first two stanzas are the same.  The third stanza introduced by the last line of stanza two:  

undiminished daffodils,

 

crocus, hyacinth and lilies

into outer space,

resurrecting April

in a February face. 


 The Return: the epigraph is from The Return by Robinson Jeffers (1887–1962) https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/return/

The Return, one of my favorites.  Everyone felt the POWER, felt the patient unfolding amid the repeats, the almost sacred feel, of "hooded water", the moon "lit the lilies to candles"..the far off shore where the  b of brush broke, a deer broke cover... and then in the penultimate stanza,  (the dark flame of a fish had appeared the stanza before that) balanced, breathing small breaths of light, this/ (enjambment)
was the world's oldest wonder, the arrow    (and then enjambed and released to fall over a stanza break,  to)

of thought, the branch that all words
break against, the deep fire, the pure poise
of an object, the pond's presence, the pike.

You could have heard a pin drop.   That enjambment of words/
to break
the return of the b -- but not in past tense, but as the universal timeless present  of thought traveling through language...
deep fire replaces dark flame, the p's of poise, pond, presence, ending in pike...
Brilliant.  We were all breathless!   I'm sure somewhere some savvy person has done an analysis, or maybe Bill asked his students to say "what's working for you here"-- or maybe he'll tell us what kind of magic this poem still works on him!